it looks good, u got some AoE, some escape and a litle support. i still dont like flawless dawnbreaker x) another thing!? in your 2-hand build you need to max all 3 attributes (magicka, health, staminia) if u want it to be usefull. no health, and u you wont survive, no magicka or no staminia will kill some of your damage output because you mix stamina used and magicka used abilities. i would suggest to try too find some skills which will debuff your opponent (skills you dont need to spam, e.x. reduced damage or slow) at the cost of magicka, so you can put more points in stamina (thats what you use with your bow) or the other way around if u change your bow skills. Thats what i would do, dont know if it would be a better build!